Drabble #14

Everything about her is crisp. There’s me, the crisp white uniform, and her crisp white cap (both heavily starched). Crisp instructions, with crisp sharp consonants. Crisp movements, nothing wasted. A crisp nod to the doctor on his rounds. If you hugged her, she’d crackle like a piece of cellophane wrapping. At least, that’s what I always thought. But then that boy, just back from Korea, grabbed her hand and squeezed it. Grabbed it with his only hand, the one missing three fingers. She finished changing his dressings (gently, not crisply at all) and ran to the closet, where she cried.


19 Comments:
At Dec 20, 2006 11:26:00 AM,
Valerie said…
I love this. I've been enjoying your blog for awhile now (even though I don't sew much yet), and this drabble series is brilliant, but this one is my favourite. It's so real and so human.
Thanks so much for brightening our days with dresses!
At Dec 20, 2006 11:33:00 AM,
Susan said…
What a sweet drabble!
At Dec 20, 2006 12:22:00 PM,
Gidget Bananas said…
Oh, jeepers, I just teared up myself.
At Dec 20, 2006 1:13:00 PM,
ambika said…
Oh wow, that was a great piece of writing. So brief but so powerful!
At Dec 20, 2006 1:20:00 PM,
Lisette said…
I have a big lump in my throat!
At Dec 20, 2006 1:28:00 PM,
melissapedsrn said…
Gulp. Erin, you did it again, girlfriend..
At Dec 20, 2006 1:37:00 PM,
Kate said…
Ohhhhh, now you've made me cry too. K Q:-0
At Dec 20, 2006 4:33:00 PM,
Cin said…
You make it all so possible, so human. I look at that dress and I can see the story unfold...
Thank you.
At Dec 20, 2006 6:02:00 PM,
iopine said…
Perfect.
At Dec 20, 2006 8:42:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
That just ROCKS. My 84yo grandmother is recovering from her 2nd total shoulder replacement and I print your new posts for her every day. She loves it and several times has reminisced that she had a similar dress. It is wonderful to hear her memory jogged...she has a lot of fashion sense. She was Miss Michigan Peach Queen 1939 (forerunner to Miss America contest). I have the locket and dress she wore in her official portrait. Thanks for giving her something so cool to look forward to!!! Katherine
At Dec 20, 2006 10:48:00 PM,
mickey said…
So...when are you going to put these in a book? I want it.
At Dec 20, 2006 11:37:00 PM,
floridaprincess said…
Awwwww!!! Great dress drable today. Bit sad tho.
At Dec 21, 2006 1:51:00 AM,
E said…
It reminds me of the piece of writing that Hemingway said was the best he had ever written. It's only six words:
"For sale: baby shoes, never worn."
At Dec 21, 2006 7:07:00 AM,
Anonymous said…
I've really enjoyed these drabbles! This one was especially touching.
At Dec 21, 2006 7:46:00 AM,
Maggi said…
Beautiful, poignant, human: you make the dresses seem more real than some of the people I work with every day.
At Dec 21, 2006 9:01:00 AM,
S. said…
Are you trying to make us cry too?
At Dec 21, 2006 10:12:00 AM,
Anonymous said…
omigod, i didn't even bother to run to the closet!
At Dec 21, 2006 10:13:00 AM,
Anonymous said…
omigod, i didn't even bother to run to the closet!
At Dec 22, 2006 9:18:00 AM,
stephanie said…
Oh, I love these drabbles - and this one made me cry as well. You are so talented.
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